I can think whatever I like
You can
My internal world is my sanctuary
It is
Nobody can see inside my head
No
My mind is free
I see you
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Caroline Jane
CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.
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'20/20'
"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan6 days ago in Beat
Comments (13)
So true! So well put! Love it!
I feel like this is a conversation I'd have with myself. Strange, I know. Well done.
So crazy how we all have our secret worlds inside of our heads. Yet, some people are skilled at picking up on our energy <3
This poem feels like the beginning of an epic horror film. Great entry!!
Oooh the ominous comfort of empathy… loved this
Wow wow such an opening of mind!
What a stunning display of brevity in action...I feel accidentally targetted a little lol. Is this how it comes across? eek. lol. Well done, Caroline.
Really excellent!! I think I am the invasive empath…
Powerful reflection on the freedom and privacy of thoughts...
I guess empathy can feel intrusive!
So true, your thoughts is certainly your sanctuary ♥️👍🏽
Oooo, the length of this poem may be short but it was soooo deep! I loved it!
A thought -provoking and thought shaping poem ! I enjoyed the essence of personal freedom in the poem .