you gotta see my show
just to say that you were there
see my show before i die
then pretend to care
and buy a t shirt
you gotta hear my work
the many lines
that i produced
hear my work
before they lock me up
for having an infirm mind
and a lot of nasty thoughts
you gotta read my book
let me into your head
for a bit
read my book
before i start to drool
before i shit my pants
before distant relatives
argue
for financial power of attorney
as they wish me further ill
under hushed poisonous breaths
take a look
at my collection of works
either singly or as a whole
and maybe one day
someone will say
they knew where they were
on the day i died
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Comments (4)
Your poetry is always so powerful! Man, that ending! Amazing work, Brenton! You really make us feel ❤️
Ah I hope not! Enjoy this little romp! 😁
Gosh this made me so emotional! So awesomeA
Oh my that ending. Wonderful