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Second Layer

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By Aspen Marie Published 16 days ago Updated 15 days ago 1 min read
Painting in progress

Come up

For air

I tell myself

Lost in a sea

Waves of thoughts

Toss me about

Pressure settles as

Diaphragm tightens

A cord cinching

Tighter, tighter

Painting reveals

My inner monologue

Brushes dance

across canvas

Sweeping, tapping

Lost in its rhythm

Heron soars while

Dover lingers below

Always in love

With those

White chalk cliffs

Once I stood

In a field of grass

Buffeted by

Ocean air

Remembering

The Princess Bride

Wishing I could

Fly away

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First layer

Collage I made for inspo

Free Verse

About the Creator

Aspen Marie

In love with life and all of its foibles.

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  • Tim Carmichael15 days ago

    This is such a wonderful and peaceful poem. You did a great job using colors and art to show how you feel. I really like the part about the "brushes dancing."

  • Well-wrought! The painting is coming along excellently! The scene I recall most is the one where Wesley retorts: "Life is pain, highness. Anyone who says differently is selling you something." It's especially important because, in the end, despite all the pain, true love prevails. Or was it "to blave"? R.I.P. Reiners...

  • A beautiful swirl of thoughts and words

  • This was so gorgeous Marie. Loved your painting and poem!

  • Paul Stewart16 days ago

    Incredible piece of art matched to breathy anxious and evocative words. Well done

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