Seaside Tides
Awakening the Senses by the Shore
By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Chris Ried on Unsplash
Golden light shimmers on the sea,
Waves whisper gently, calling me.
The sand is warm beneath my feet,
Salt clings to my tongue, sharp and sweet.
A breeze carries coconut, wild and free.
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Comments (4)
Takes me back to summer and hawaiin tropic sunscreen! That is far away from the chilled air and frost tipped cedars! thanks
Nice!
Very well written
Now I want to go to the beach. Great work.