Stealthily creeping
Stealing my bits and pieces
My essential self
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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Comments (6)
Hey Andrew, I feel like that second line can have a few meanings and I liked that. 😔
So sad ☹
You dramatize the condition perfectly. Sad but true state of Alzheimers.
It's scary how it creeps up and slowly steals one's memories. You're capturing Alzheimer's perfectly with these senryus.
This is really powerful. It captures the slow, creeping nature of Alzheimer's and the emotional impact of losing pieces of yourself. So poignant and raw.
Well written Haiku about aHorrible disease ✍️🏆♦️♦️♦️♦️