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Saved with you
Saved by you
Saved from the darkness that comes near
Saved from pain, eventually
Not immune but protected
To find our own path
Saved to live - and die
To finally breathe again and walk close
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Archery Owl
Father and Friend
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This was so beautiful! Loved your poem!
Wonderful words with your poets.good luck.❤️🔥❤️🔥🙏
I like this sense of people sticking together, getting strength from each other.
This is beautiful- it reminds me of Easter them and how salvation was provided.
I love your poem! Great work! Wonderful !