
Beauty, once obvious innately
Deemed lacking in utility
What good’s a vase used only for visibility?
Then shattered prejudicially
Replaced by a lamp, rich in functionality
Beauty repurposed harshly
Forced into a new mold awkwardly
But look at the efficiency!
Isn’t this room a little bland now, sweetie?
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Written for A Mikeydred One Week Sad Poem Challenge For All Vocal Creators.
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Matthew J. Fromm
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Comments (14)
It perfectly captures the way society sometimes undervalues intrinsic beauty and forces it into a mold of "usefulness." The final question, "Isn't this room a little bland now, sweetie?" is a brilliant mic drop – it leaves the reader pondering the true cost of sacrificing beauty for mere functionality. This piece is both insightful and deeply moving.✨👍
really nice and relatable
Very nicely done.
The rhyme in this really clipped along nicely. I dare say efficiently. Yet also beautifully.
Oooo, that was so profound! Loved your poem!
Excellent words worthy of a top story. Love the image
Very nice
Wonderfully done, Matthew
Just knocking it out the park these days, Matthew! love the discussion of practicality over something that is just beautiful!
Perfect lines on both lyric and art
This poem hits with such clever tension between practicality and beauty!
This worked exceedingly well. Believe me. 😎👏
Perhaps some tenderness and sensitivity are being lost. Amazing poem ✨
Beautiful job and thank you for sharing this symbolic piece! :)