Salty Breaths
submerge my existence
spinning in slow motion
afflicted by my own perception
ankle deep in ocean
I am alive as
the water is cold
waves crash against my chest
the salt itself
trying it’s best
to grab open air
if only to breathe
both of us
gasping for oxygen
in frigid sea
I close my eyes
and quiet my mind
for what feels like
the last time
arms spread
I fall back and
submerge my existence
drift to open waters
pity sinks
along with me
continue to struggle
for my last breath
tied with the feeling
of no hope left
is when
you look out
to see me surface
like a spring whale
taking my very first breath
to breathe
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Jeffrey Sparks
Adversity is kindling I choose to burn to keep my hands warm in winter ensuring my words will stretch beyond the years that turn my bones to dust.
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Comments (1)
Love this one!!!