Braided hair and salty beach breath
Did you forget
It was only yesterday
you woke in my bed?
You told me you wanted
to kiss the moon
And I love how our lips
find each other in the dark
You say you love my soul
and I can’t help but
See your eyes
when I close mine
...
About the Creator
Danielle Marie
IG: @whoispennyblack
Danielle (“Penny Black”) has created two manuscripts to date. Her newest manuscript, Island Fever, is soon to be published.
She resides in Hawai’i.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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I can really feel the passion behind your words!