Salt and Lime, a Bitter Crime
National Margarita Day February 22

The rim is dusted with salt,
sharp as the bite of regret,
a jagged whisper against cracked lips.
You lift the glass like a quiet confession,
fingers trembling, ice clinking,
the sound of old bones shifting in shallow graves.
A squeeze of lime—
acidic, cruel, a burst of something once fresh,
now twisted, now ruined,
like promises left in the sun too long.
It drips down your wrist,
veins mapping out a story
that no one wants to read.
Tequila slithers down your throat,
warm and ruthless,
a ghost of laughter from nights
you swore you’d forget.
It burns in all the wrong places,
scorching the hollows where love once slept.
The bar lights flicker,
casting shadows on faces
you almost recognize,
echoes of yourself in the reflections
of broken bottles and lipstick stains.
Another sip, another hour lost
in the fog of citrus and sorrow.
Margaritas taste like summer’s last breath,
like hands letting go,
like a slow drowning in something
that was supposed to keep you afloat.
You swallow.
The ice has melted.
And the night is still so very,
very cold.
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About the Creator
Diane Foster
I’m a professional writer, proofreader, and all-round online entrepreneur, UK. I’m married to a rock star who had his long-awaited liver transplant in August 2025.
When not working, you’ll find me with a glass of wine, immersed in poetry.


Comments (6)
Very cool, the voice is so fleshed out I can almost hear it ask me for a spare cigarette outside. Well done!
Fantastic!!! Love it!!!
Beautiful poem. Love the metaphors
Wonderful dark analogy here, great take on the challenge
Well-wrought! "...in the fog of citrus and sorrow." This was an awesome line, and woud make a bitchin' album name for, like, a prog rock or metal band. Or a Dio song!
Beautiful metaphors for sorrow, Diane.