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Sadness
Depressed, lonely
Surviving, fighting, crying
Frown, tears, smile, laugher
Praising, dancing, enjoying life
Happy, energize
Joyfulness
About the Creator
L.I.E
Hey, I'm Emily! Thanks for reading. Hope you read something that inspires you. Or something that you find relatable.
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Nice work
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The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (6)
Your poem's structure effectively illustrates the transition from negative emotions to positive ones.
Oooo, I especially loved the transition from negative to positive!
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This poem had a great vibe and the juxtaposition made it very real.
I love this. Has a great flow and vibe to it
It was like a 'Surviving' Vs 'Actually Living' poem 🤝 I loved the vibe of it ❤