[ Top Layer: 𝓢𝓟𝓐𝓡𝓚 ✨]
Another revolution of the wheel—
no star-groups to lead the way,
no guidebook for the tempests,
yet you are here:
still SOARING through galaxies,
still BLAZING fire-trails across the heavens.
[ Second Layer: 𝓕𝓛𝓐𝓥𝓞𝓡🧂]
You've got grit in the bone marrow,
grit in the STARDUST wisdom,
and just a D_A_S_H of mystery
to keep the planet leaning in.
[ Third Layer: 𝓦𝓘𝓢𝓗𝓔𝓢 🪄]
May serendipities divert your days (the sunny kind),
may LAUGHTER surprise like summer storm,
and may your STEPS trip only into
doors that open wide.
[ Fourth Layer: 𝓠𝓤𝓘𝓡𝓚 😉]
Here's to fewer MAZES,
more GREEN lights,
and less faking your compass senses
where "true north" conceals itself.
[ Base Layer: 𝓨𝓞𝓤 💫 ]
Solitary constellation.
Alchemy of ᑕᒪEᐯEᖇᑎEᔕᔕ + Sₜₐbᵢₗᵢₜy.
The obscure frequency SOULS hear to
when they're LUCKY enough
to count YOU among friends.
Cԋҽҽɾʂ Tσ ყσυɾ RADIANT, ʂƚαɾ-ƈɾαϝƚҽԃ ყҽαɾ αԋҽαԃ!!!🍻
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (8)
I love how you’ve crafted a poem that reads like a personalized journey through hope, grit, and joy. The mix of cosmic imagery and grounded wishes makes it feel both magical and intimate.
This poem show your beautiful soul. 🥰
Your ‘fourth layer’ speaks to me. Your poem is able to reach out and include many of us, not just one group. That is the genius of this piece
I love the layered style here!
This feels like a love letter to me and to all of us who walk interesting paths! You always have your finger on the pulse of insight and seeing, and you lift us up with your love.
Love it, Komal. Stellar beauty! "Here's to fewer MAZES, more GREEN lights, and less faking your compass senses" ❤️😁😊😍✨💫🌙☀️
This is really full of special effects and layers of depth. Beautiful job! Thank you for sharing your work with the world 🌍
Aww. This is so very special and sweet. Great job!