
From this bed, a satellite, I orbit our fragile blue sphere,
A membrane thin as the sheets that envelop us here.
You're a speck on rust-red rock, a hidden, precious thing,
Beneath the gauzy veil, where love and sorrow cling.
As I, a satellite, transmit signals of anguish and pain,
Your voice responds, a haunting refrain, a 7-cello strain.
Each vibration echoes, devastating and strong,
A late-spring river's rumble, where our hearts belong.
I'm a stifled frequency, merging with the scent,
Of your damp hair, woodsy musk, amidst our combustible dent.
In this two-person world, where love turns to despair,
I'm a fractured cry, a child's scream, with a broken limb to spare.
Words tremble like your hands, the morning after the night,
Stinging like a childhood cavity, a Halloween fright.
Ruptured, I expel the toxic waste of expired years,
A decade's sour filth, as our love dissolves through tears.
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Your word-usage is so vivid and different-gauzy veil, woodsy musk,- you're a great writer! love it!