Break all those Chains the World has Set
Let Me Be Honest with Myself, No more Deceit
Let's take a moment and find the True self I haven't met
I wanna Rise before the Sunset
A Crowd of Sheeps Rule over the Wolf inside me
The Wisdom of the Sheeps won't let Me Be
But a Wave Drowned Me in an Abyss of a Silent Sea
In this Emptiness —what will Define Me?
About the Creator
Karan w.
Writer || Poet || Author
Author of "The Resonance–Two Together-Lost Forever
All worlds collapse the moment they touch the ground of reality—worlds I once created. Yet I find my bliss in the dissolution of my creations
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Comments (11)
Inspirational powerful poem. Nicely Done!!!
powerfully inspirational
Deep thinking Sk, nice job.
There is a lot here for one to think about and really like the image. Good job.
This is such a powerful poem. I found it interesting how you used the crowd of sheep as your antagonist. Sheep can go either way the protagonist when they are the ones being fooled and attacked by the wolf or the antagonist when they blindly follow the wolf into their slaughter. Very interesting.
That’s like my champ bro 👏 🤍 Let me see you do a 100 in my life 😆😉 Loved the poem, when you said, “no more deceit” it felt hard 🔥 Good job!!!!
Nice
"A Crowd of Sheeps Rule over the Wolf inside me" Oh wow, that line made me pause and think. It was so deep and yet again, a new concept from you. I'm so impressed. Loved your poem!
Powerful!
that line the wisdom of the sheeps won't let me be really stuck with me it captures that inner conflict so clearly and made me pause to reflect thanks for sharing such raw emotion through your words❤
Nice