Rimestones
First frost poetry entry; November Rime

Barren community garden
dried-up stalks, charcoal mounds
withered tomato plants-
a few stragglers hang onto the eroding overhang
soon to be ghosts of a November's past
as an approaching December hovers
first frost doses a plot
a not-so-long-ago thriving scenario
with whispers of crystals
freezing colorful garden life
like memories buried under grounded leaves
mud sludge and mukluks
my footprints are imprints
tracing me back to the boondocks
childhood and livelihood
places I'd rather be
and I shiver a bit
recalling many November's past
bone chills to landfills
many hills that I've climbed
rewind, aligned, things heavy on my mind
yet my sullen emotions
Autumn death anniversaries
one dated on my birthday
a November eight, one I'd rather forget
but time won't let me
seasons, cycles, things I regret
these feelings come to the surface
walking a wiped-out garden terrain
*
Then a side-eyed glance
causes reason for pause
a gust of wind carries my gasp
across a fading field
stirring an unearthed Spring
my feet melt into a slow-chilling soil
one lone yellow flower
halts my brooding
my sorrow
my weathered heartbeat
one lone yellow daisy
lingers but is far from lazy
stilled sunshine in an hourglass
knows not of time or circumstance
first frost dazzles her presence
rime glitters on her petals like rhinestones
sparkly rings on golden fingers
reaching out to me
"hold my image in your heart"
she speaks
fading the bruises of my past's peruse
planting seeds for morrow's garden
even when hefty snowprints
will outweigh overturned soil
hope, not one season's seedling
blooms even in harsh conditions
mindset: fertilizer, or salt
the choice is mine
considering the beauty of rime-
first frost on a flower
a yellow daisy
an insistent blossom
late autumn flourisher
lacking reason, yet full of rhyme
*
Winterfall, before me
soon a whiteout washout
will paint this landscape
ivory snowdrifts
scattered pawprints
a once lively garden
sleeping
covered up snug with nature's blanket
hibernation- the magick of inner workings
unseen but are there just the same
a time to rest
time to dream
reflect and wonder
and underneath it all
the freeze and frost
sleet and snow
sunshine is pushing up
yes, like daisies
but not of solemn reminders
graveyards to tombstones
but rhinestones
all the gems, collected and ripe for picking
all the hope in the world
the spirit that remains with us
when all else turns to dirt and dust
***
Author's note: my frost poetry entry reflects on personal emotions upon Winter's arrival and the memories of death anniversaries in November. Sometimes "winter wonderland" is hard to achieve especially when depression and life's crazy moments get in the way. First frost on a daisy reminded me of rhinestones and another word for frost is rime, hence my creative take on the challenge.
Here is the actual photo that inspired my poem, taken in my community garden this November:

About the Creator
Marilyn Glover
Poet, writer, & editor, writing to uplift humanity. A Spiritual person who practices Reiki and finds inspiration in nature.
Mother of four, grandmother of two, British American dual citizen living in the States



Comments (4)
The photo is stunning! This was so beautifully done! Incredibly written! 💌
Your piece will help so many going through their struggles during this time of year. Well done Marilyn. I’m sending you a huge hug and lots of love ❤️
Your poem was so poignant and emotional. So beautifully written. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
Well done Marilyn.