
Light flies after sunset
And darkness lines up on the paths
A cloud chases the flash of light
And takes the evening as a light to ride on
And the light forgot and fell in mockery
And follows the winds on the wind
And the tails whistle the tails of light
And do not drift between the steps of calamities
And the night calls with determination as it calls
To that gathering in the unseen
And the evening sets off to the palaces
Their buildings are on the edge of the south
And the evening hides from the people
So they thought it was the valley of sorrows
And the darkness ascended to the light
And said to it: Wait for me in the holes
But it did not come down And when dawn came to it
Here dawn did not accept a cover
And the darkness of night blew in the paths
About the Creator
Kisama Riyo
I have always been interested in poetry and essay, especially rhyme style, so I decided to post my essay here and see if I have any talent in poetry or not.
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