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Thirsty gardens

The cup of rain came

By Kisama Riyo Published about a year ago 1 min read

Thirst for life extended a cup

The rain fell heavily, increasing his misery

So he thought the cup was filled with drizzle

And he did not see despair from it when it fell

The sky blessed him, so it was filled

A flowering plant came to him

Gardens that were not crowded with life were thirsty

And the drops awakened a plant in it

The drought and the scent of rain disappeared

It perfumed and sent five breezes

And the breezes attacked a field of roses

Telling him: I return to you as a spirit

And spring awaits the autumn of life

As the clouds of omen covered the sun

And the chattering breeze wanders until

It came to the horizons to tell when the evening came

So the clouds did not skimp on flowers

On that cloud life arose

You will thank a drop that brought life

And imprison the spring of life

For Funnature poetry

About the Creator

Kisama Riyo

I have always been interested in poetry and essay, especially rhyme style, so I decided to post my essay here and see if I have any talent in poetry or not.

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