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just thinking out aloud

By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

and all the old me's

trapped and wrapped

in those tatty pages

all those old times

hand written, typed

or on a pc

the seconds

the ages

all the time i spent

jotting down a part of me

while not all of it’s

in writing yet

some of it will/can never be

i will rise to the challenge

as best i can manage

and i will scribble the rest

to make it so you can see

hunched over the latest version

of my word making machine

upholding my part of the deal

i strike while my irons hot

smithing words: fictitious and real

images harrowing and hurtful

i carefully choose what i will

and won't show

everything meticulously blended

so no one will ever know

and if i should slip

my moral bindings

prudence is a word

to bear in mind

because in my diggings

and shiftings of soils

just out and about

one never knows

what one

will find

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Moon Desert3 years ago

    Your writing - a pact with the devil or angel?

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