Just look at this old teachers' desk,
It looks like its' been used by a pest.
Look at the notes on this piece
for it is really all about someone's niece.
There is a face
that seems to keep pace
with the words on the board
that just seems to make us bored.
I'm not very good at writing rhyme,
but when given time I think I will be prime.
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Mark Graham
I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.
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The imagery of an old teacher’s desk and scattered notes brings a touch of nostalgia.
This is a great rhyming poem!😊💕
Superb poem
Captivating poem!!!