“Revived”
When I look into your eyes
It’s no surprise I’m still alive
Looking deep into those mellow eyes
I cannot fathom a life nor strife
An inner spirit that so thrives
Like a cherry blossom come to life
Kissing, or when you are missing
I fall asleep revived by those
Cocoa eyes
-CWH-
About the Creator
Corey W Harland
Retired soldier, writing as a therapy, hobby, and as a dream career as I go. I hope to fill this page with poetry, photographs, and stories that will inspire all who read to embrace their own beauty and let their own lights shine bright!
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Lovely poem, Corey.