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Reverse It Forward

By VJHDPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
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You’ll never find a mind like mine

For all the parallels we can draw

Nothing really that goes with rhyme

Something inside that is not familiar

You cannot tell us apart in time

All differently uniquely similar

I’ll turn to ash as fast as we came

We are all made of the salt in the sea

I fall and skip and dance the same

Breathing in air and singing out free

you see I look just like this universe

I’m built as tall and strong like too

I go forwards only when I don’t reverse

I’m made to look and sound like you

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I’m made to look and sound like you

I go forwards only when I don’t reverse

I’m built as tall and strong like too

you see I look just like this universe

Breathing in air and singing out free

I fall and skip and dance the same

We are all made of the salt in the sea

I’ll turn to ash as fast as we came

All differently uniquely similar

You cannot tell us apart in time

Something inside that is not familiar

Nothing really that goes with rhyme

For all the parallels we can draw

You’ll never find a mind like mine

surreal poetry

About the Creator

VJHD

The subsistence of our lives will live on in our words, forever encapsulating our feelings.

Words are the centre point of our existence. If we never write anything down, did we ever really exist at all?

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