
The ties that I cut
To carve out my peace
It’s been almost a year
I’ve made it this far
~
The habits I broke
To keep myself sane
The time that it took
I’ve made it this far
~
The places I left
To keep us away
It got very quiet
I’ve made it this far
~
The days that we cross
acquaintances we share
The silence gets mad
But I’ve made it this far
~
The events that take place
When you are around
I close my eyes waiting
Cause I’ve made it this far
~
My peace is not optional
But our friendship sadly was
I see you haven’t changed yet
You have further to go.
~
VJHD 26/1/23
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VJHD
The subsistence of our lives will live on in our words, forever encapsulating our feelings.
Words are the centre point of our existence. If we never write anything down, did we ever really exist at all?
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