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Cutting Ties

I’ve made it this far

By VJHDPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
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The ties that I cut

To carve out my peace

It’s been almost a year

I’ve made it this far

~

The habits I broke

To keep myself sane

The time that it took

I’ve made it this far

~

The places I left

To keep us away

It got very quiet

I’ve made it this far

~

The days that we cross

acquaintances we share

The silence gets mad

But I’ve made it this far

~

The events that take place

When you are around

I close my eyes waiting

Cause I’ve made it this far

~

My peace is not optional

But our friendship sadly was

I see you haven’t changed yet

You have further to go.

~

VJHD 26/1/23

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VJHD

The subsistence of our lives will live on in our words, forever encapsulating our feelings.

Words are the centre point of our existence. If we never write anything down, did we ever really exist at all?

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