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Refusal

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By Paul StewartPublished 24 days ago Updated 24 days ago 1 min read
Refusal
Photo by Sander Sammy on Unsplash

Bullshit
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This is bullshit
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This
That
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Old jazzy analogy
where the gasps and gaps hold importance
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.
White space empty
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As important as your poesy prose
eroticised linguistics
.
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How the page commands
and dominates
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The words
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Butchered
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For consumers
Feasters
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Fervent poetry junkies
Getting their fix
Ravenous
.
.
There’s always some motherfucker
waiting to tell you what you can’t do
.
Spread it wide spread it thin
i will
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Lose or gain meaning
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fuck
and clarity
.
you
.
in the spaces
.
up
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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Jess Boyes24 days ago

    100% relatable. It’s easy for the nay sayers to say, “you’re doing it wrong”, but fuck that. To me, it’s about creating in however you want to express yourself. Love this, Paul

  • There's no better motivation than someone telling us that we can't do something. Loved this!

  • Harper Lewis24 days ago

    Hell to the yeah. This fucking slaps. A joyride.

  • JBaz24 days ago

    There are rules to poetry, yet most of those rules are meant to be challenged and in cases …broken, Write on Paul

  • Nope. My response to this is...we shouldn't allow anyone or anything to dilute our voices. We are who we are.Thumbs up, Paul.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji24 days ago

    Poetry junkies haha. Ya writing poetry there is no set way-poetry is so open and complex. I felt the wrath

  • Tanya Lei24 days ago

    Lol poetry junkies. They can tell us what we can't do, but we won't listen 🙂‍↔️ Exploring the blank space again I see! amazing work, Paul.

  • Mother Combs24 days ago

    Wow, the power in this piece. You put a lot of anger into this one. Well done, Paul <3

  • A. J. Schoenfeld24 days ago

    Your use of white space in this poem for so perfectly with the tension and anger. Everything felt perfectly timed with the spacing to emphasize the meaning. I loved how you intermixed the words of the last eight lines to highlight the importance of what comes between the words. Again a very Paul poem. One that begs the question, are you having a rough day?

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