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Rebirth

A Crown Cinquain

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Rebirth
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Hope rises from ashes, and combats loss. - Michelle Liew

This poem complements Clandestine, a Crown Cinquain on loss written beautifully by Dharsheena.

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Ashes

Blown by the wind

Embers begin to light

From dust, something springs anew

Kindled

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Kindled

By loving hands

A soft voice stirs

A new soul, form true, is a balm

Healing

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Healing

Delicate steps

Each tread slowly soothes pain

And bridges form where walls were built

Mending

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Mending

Scars on hurt souls

They forge a bond anew

Through trust rebuilt, their strength combined

Stronger

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Stronger

Now than ever

Twin souls, rising from pain

Rise from the ashes, hands holding

Rebirth

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Oh my, you executed this so beautifully! It was soooo powerful! So well done!

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Lovely work. And “bridges form” - I like that idea a lot! 😊

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Stunning & brimming with Hope! 💖

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Ah, rebirth - yet many times it isn’t possible or it happens only to fall due to the original selfish person reverting to their normal behavior😢. Your poem is beautiful!

  • Deep Knowledge Hubabout a year ago

    Amazing poem!

  • Mother Combsabout a year ago

    Stunningly inspirational. Love it

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Very deep

  • Komalabout a year ago

    This is stunning! It’s like watching two souls find their way back to each other—strengthened, healed, and whole. Truly a beautiful journey in words!

  • NEERAJ KUMAR SINGHabout a year ago

    beautifull

  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    Beautiful ♦️♦️ please read a few of mine 🌺🌺🌺🌺

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Ohh! It is a beautiful and impactful depiction of ups and downs, struggles, and the power of rising. Wonderful✨

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    ⚡❤️⚡

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