I write what I like On Vocal
I some times have
No grammar structure
And yet The. My
Creation get published
This is my Rebel
Poem .
This was fun to
Write
The Freedom
Of not having
Any structure
And yet
I express my
Self RiGHT
I wonder
If this ReBEl
Poem with
Get published
At all.
No need
Any Alcohol
To pull
This crazy poem
Of mine.
ReBEls
Are
Sometimes
A sHip
Kcerw
Did u see I spell
Wreck backwards
And it did not make
Sense
This ReBel poem
Was made without
Any sense.
I hope you enjoy
My most confused
Poem. Cause
Sometimes
Rebels don’t
Make
Sense.
Ha ha Ha Ha
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (13)
With a rebel yell you said it all. Well done for letting it go
Rebel poems are good to do! I found sense in the non sense where we be our authentic selfs and not the masks that society expects you to have.
Aha!!! That's what I'm saying. That's for you and I get along so well Mariann, where to rebels that don't always make sense and that is okay. Love your poem, it made a lot of sense to me.
Unique, impressive, and playfully fun!!! Love, love, love!!!💖😊💕
I love your rebelliousness! I sometimes feel like my poems should have more structure, but don’t worry about structure or for very often. Occasionally I come up with lines that rhyme.
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Fun stuff!
Lol! This was awesomeeee!!! Welcome to the rebellious side. My favourite part of your poem is 'kcerw'! It's so refreshing to read something new! And loved your Dracula laugh at the end! 🤣
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. LOVE this side of you!
Oh, this was a joy to read! I loved your rebel style :)
Haha. Well done.
I love it 😂
The thing is does a deliberate "NO STRUCTURE" become a structure in itself? While most of my poetry is strictly structured often I like just running free like you have done with this excellent poem.