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Real Full Feel

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By BrenPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
© South Park

something inside me

died tonight

and this time

i could feel it

as it went

as well as

after it was gone

it was real time

it was feel time

a real full feel

and it was gone

this time

another light

dimmed

and went out

peripheral pinpricks

of dark light

blink and fade out

forever

it was deal time

it was feel time

a real full feel

and then it was gone

no pop,

no fizzle

no sign

no smell

just this

empty in me

what used

to be

there was

still time

another

feel time

a real full feel

and now it’s gone

that thing that was in me

now its not anymore

of that i am sure

and now?

...not anymore

it was feel time

it was real time

a feel full of real

and… it’s gone

sad poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    This was so poignant and emotional. Loved your poem!

  • Wow nice!

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