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Rapunzel’s New Dawn

Time to be free girl, just follow me

By Marie381Uk Published 5 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Rapunzel’s New Dawn

Rapunzel, please let down your hair

there’s lots of life for you to share

It’s now time to let down your locks

as opportunity on your door knocks

The tower walls have kept you still

yet dreams lie waiting past the sill

No chains can hold what longs to be

a life beyond for you to see

The sky is wide, the roads are near

the world is calling loud and clear

Step out, release the years of stay

Rapunzel let them drift away

The mirror shows what time has kept

the hours you lost, the tears you wept

Now turn the page, no need to hide

take back the glow you hold inside

The winds will lift, the stars will guide

no tower now, no walls to bide

The locks you drop will mark the start

of freedom flowing through your heart

Rapunzel life is yours to claim

no whispered tale, no shadowed name

The doors are open, wide and true

the world is waiting just for you

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham5 months ago

    Boy, you really are putting a new twist to old favorites. Good job.

  • Uplifting and full of hope—loved the way you turned Rapunzel’s story into a powerful symbol of freedom. 🌟

  • Lana V Lynx5 months ago

    What a great inspirational interpretation of an old tale, Marie!

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