Just in case you’re wondering, I’m not a rapper. I’m the carnivorous king of Jurassic Park, a velociraptor.
I don’t care what other predator stings in the jungle. I’m the meat eating king of the jungle.
I got a big mouth but when I get ready to start taking bites you might wanna start taking flight.
I’m a little big dude a few meters long. My teeth are long and when I’m hungry I’ll start eating long.
When it comes to mess with me ain’t no testing me. Most brutal-full in the jungle is T-Rex then me.
This Jurassic Predator is hungry snapped for raps. From the mic to the mountains I bring the raptor raps.
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Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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Comments (7)
Good poem Joe! You're on a "Dinosaur Roll!" I've yet to even write my first.
Nicely done!
very Nice Joe.
You might have to start singing & recording these poems 🤔… With a name like velociraptor & his attitude… he’s a perfect fit to be a rapper 😆.
It is nice brother. Well done.
This was slammin'! I freaking loved it!
What a brilliant and different way of writing. I enjoyed that!