Rainy Day in the Car

There's nothing better than rain cancelling a dinner date. It's so much better when it's just the two of you watching the raindrops racing down the windshield. I have a feeling this is or was one of the few times when you were truly vulnerable. The smile to let him know that the day wasn’t ruined. 'all worries were rain washed' oh I really do love this line. Me and my husband had the sun and the moon as our profile picture on WhatsApp when we were dating. Though I can't remember which of us was the sun and which was the moon. So it made me smile reading that bit. 'I wished for you for the rest of my life' oh my. This line was so loved up I just can't help but feel it all. This was fantastic, it makes me love, love, even more. 🤗❤️

Rain adds to romantic ambiance too. Loved the poem, visualized.

This is so sweet! I love "All worries were rainwashed".

Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Beautiful. Love it! 🌷

Aww. Rainy days are so romantic, aren't they? Like what Test said, we should isolate those times!

"World-forgetting laughter" If only we could bottle those moments--wait, you did! :)

This is such a sweet, beautiful poem… ‘Silence ensued Tranquil and serene We watched the raindrops Racing down the windshield Our fingers intertwined Conversation bloomed’… The simple moments in life are often the best.🤩

It's beautiful! I love it!

I'm lucky enough to have someone that elicits these feelings for me. For the longest time, I thought that I couldn't fall in love, that I was too emotionally numb for that, but as it turns out, I just had to wait for an amazing Raven. You are such an amazing writer, My Morbid Friend.

This is such a great piece, one of your classics in my opinion! I love the authenticity of it and relatability of it! Felt like a scene from a movie and was beautifully executed with your imagery! Great work D!

This is so beautiful

I love this 💞

Dharr, That was truly beautiful. I pictured the scene, smelled the rain felt the love. so good.

Such a beautiful and intimate poem! Wonderful and evocative 💙Anneliese

Oh this unlocked a memory I didn’t realize I had, I could feel this poem!! 🥹

The imagery gets me in this poem... it pulls me in and places me in the car! I love the way your descriptive language plays on my senses and just brings me this sense of peace, this sense of home. So beautifully written!

Loved this!

Brings you right to the moments of serenity. Sitting in a car and talking while it is raining is so special ❤️ Love it

Wow, this was magical! If there’s two things I love, it’s rain and moments of intimacy with another person. You combined them, and your use of language is superb here as always.

This was beautiful Dharrsheena! I'm in love with your imagery and use of simile! My favourites were the cotton candy melting in water and the sun and moon reference! 💜

Wow beautiful poem! I wish for the same! 😀

Another beautiful one. You have a gift! I really enjoyed this one, it felt very real.

Just love this so much