I like the drizzle,
Because I can sacrifice you my chest-umbrella,
I bloom by thundering,
Because you hide in my arms,
I love when flowers bloom,
Because they make you a princess by having them on your head,
I am pleased if your footwear is lost,
Because then I can carry you,
I like your hands to comb my thick peach fuzz,
Because then I can't think of anything,
Dear, it is just you, own the exquisite smile,
That made me a poet,
These eyes blink like never ever before,
Only because your sight mixed with much innocence,
It is just like bearing one flower in the whole life,
By a sunflower stalk,
I can immerse myself in an ocean of thoughts for you,
I know, water in that ocean is never salty,
You are not an anatomy to me,
But a mesmerizing feeling,
Yes my intimate, it is!
About the Creator
Esala Gunathilake
I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.
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This is incredible!!!!
Peaceful π
Beautiful π
the imagery of nature intertwined with affection creates a vivid picture of deep emotional connection..
Chest umbrella...is so cute. This a wonderfully cozy poem, Esala.
Nice poem
Amazing..
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Adorable indeed!
Wao this is great π
Beautiful!
This is so beautiful
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Great, your words convey a sense of awe and appreciation for this special connection, thank you for sharing this heartfelt and captivating poem.
Very nice.
I love your poem
Very nice poem.
I pretty sure your girlfriend would love this. It's beautiful especially the line 'You are not an anatomy to me, But a mesmerizing feeling'. Another masterpiece.
I was enchanted when I read your content, thank you Esala, for all your efforts, time and good feelings
So beautifully mesmerizing! I especially liked these two lines "You are not an anatomy to me,/But a mesmerizing feeling,"
Magnificent): Keep up the good work!
Very romantic.
Woah!!!!This is next level and your imagination is so soothing and gives me an inviting feeling....You nicely spreads the love through these lines...Well done bro!!