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Rafi's Avalanche

A haiku from an 8 year old

By Sam SpinelliPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Rafi's Avalanche
Photo by Krzysztof Kowalik on Unsplash

it's a disaster!

snow thunders down the mountain.

trees snap. crush! woooosh! boom!

Author's note:

Another haiku written mostly by my 8 year old son. I helped him even less with this one than I had with his volcano poem. And I legit feel like the two he wrote with my minor help were way better than all the ones I wrote solo :)

childrens poetry

About the Creator

Sam Spinelli

Trying to make human art the best I can, never Ai!

Help me write better! Critical feedback is welcome :)

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