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And Finish Lines

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 10 months ago 1 min read

There are angels on the subway

With good intentions at the door

Mixed flowers in a spring bouquet

As feathers fall upon the floor

Prayers meant just for heaven

Filling the ears of the divine

Grace and mercy given

As miracles move down the line

Holy and mundane meet

Turning tickets and turnstiles

Traveling at a high rate of speed

Under streets by blocks and miles

Sacred and sacrilegious join

The profane and the profound

Two sides of a mirrored coin

Hallowed feet on mortal ground

Entertaining angels unaware

Almost everywhere we go

miraculous moments of savior-farie

As our hearts and halos glow

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About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    Love this one for when my time comes, I feel that I will either be a guardian angel of some kind or ghost just trying to help others. Good job.

  • Still loving it, lol.

  • Dana Crandell10 months ago

    Beautifully written, with that Kelli flair! Love this one.

  • VoiceOfAnOutlier10 months ago

    Beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it.

  • John Cox10 months ago

    This is a lovely and immersive poem, Kelli. I especially loved the wordplay. I had not heard the quote ‘entertaining angels unaware’ in decades!

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    🩷

  • Test10 months ago

    This is just such a sweet little poem, finding the holy in the everyday. I particularly love the metaphorical expression "Two sides of a mirrored coin," so nicely implying the conjunction of the worldly and the spiritual. It makes you view the world, including a subway commute, with a sense of awe.🤎

  • The way you explore competition, struggle, and resilience is powerful and thought-provoking.

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    Simply beautiful, my friend. Well done.

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