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Whisps of clouds glide
leisurely across
the open sky,
driven by the breeze
on their way
to destinations
unknown, or perhaps,
going nowhere in particular.
I savor the simple charm
of this place of quietude.
.
I do not bother
marking the time.
Rather, I gaze only
at the vast expanse
of blue and light.
If this is not
peace, it is
certainly something
that rhymes,
heralding possibilities
previously unimagined.
About the Creator
Randy Baker
Poet, author, essayist.
My Vocal "Top Stories":
* The Breakers Motel * 7 * Holding On * Til Death Do Us Part * The Fisherman
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (6)
Peaceful but with a hint of yearning! Lovely work!
Your poem is a wonder. I feel tension lifting off my shoulders having read it. Lovely writing, Randy.
And I savour the simple charm of this lovely poem ☺️🥰 Nice work Randy 👌
Well now, that turned out quite refreshing. Great work!
Exceptional work!
Great use of the words. I like the lines about something “rhyming” with peace