
Soon, celestial spheres will form a bright line
Sorting themselves, single file
Such signs and portents are said to be semantically dense
Legible and enigmatic
Clear and obscure
Marking momentous moments
Auguring apocalypse
Or neglected laundry
Or the right moment to fix your courage to the sticky place
And ask that demur barista to read a bad poem
In hopes that she will sit patiently through a long explanation
Of its coy, pretentious brevity
Perhaps, when planets play these parts
Resolve their differences long enough to hang
Out of our grasp, but within our reach
They show that when the heavens are aligned
The earth is seething with implausible chaos
Familiarity is on holiday
Insatiable greed is a virtue
Vanity and pride confirm rude health
Plagiarism is the most fashionable of literary modes
We do chores for machines
The noses of the multitude are pressed to the thick window
While their bread becomes fodder for smirking, oligarchical selfies
In an exclusive restaurant in orbit
Criminals become kings
Ignorance is less awkward than knowledge
Gracious hosts are suckers
Whining, gluttonous ingratitude
Is the hip and sophisticated mark of a modern guest
Scripture shrinks to suit the SMS
Mendaciloquence is sexier than plodding honesty
Platitudes about wellness are all of the medicine most can afford
We are anxious about our depression and depressed by our anxiety
We wear out the name of trauma, applying it indiscriminately
To everything from a broken printer to a storming of the capitol
Which our eyes lied about
As they seem increasingly to do
While sinister salutes
Masquerade as charming clumsiness
While thoughtless robots do the fact checking
And large language models write the eulogies
Of organic minds
The solar system, sublimely synchronized
Proves a planetary parody
Macrocosm mocking microcosm
Paeans to the police
Prepare the way for the release
Of their deranged assailants
Reality is television
Television is dead
I stream, you stream, we all stream while we scream
Nothing is worth what it costs
And prices climb toward the heavenly queue
Silent, suggestive
Impossible and real
Mere accident
Coincidence
Quickly dismissed as a hoax
A conspiracy
A sign from them
Such an elastic, vacuous pronoun
That we
Are out of line
About the Creator
D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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Comments (8)
"Auguring apocalypse Or neglected laundry" ensnared me and I was transfixed every beat after! Very masterfully done, D.J.!
Amazing from, title to end! Hard to pick favorite lines. Platitudes was great, and I relay loved scripture.
Wow, this piece is something else—sharp, witty, and packed with some serious truth bombs. It’s like a cosmic rollercoaster through modern chaos, with just the right touch of humor and cynicism. The way you weave the planetary alignment with our messy reality? Brilliant. Keep writing—your perspective is refreshing and unapologetically real! 🚀✨
Oooo, mendaciloquence is a new word for me! I freaking loved your poem!
Deeply deftly done. My word, D.J. I am reeling from what you've put together here. Such word play, such bite. Succinctly showing what we're all knowing. Excellent.
Wow! I am still lingering on these words that paint an accurate picture of what reality has become/is becoming. 'An embarrassing shame' is not the correct phrase to summarize the potential dangers of immature minds calling the shots. 4 years, huh? Our patience and dignity won't last 4 months. This whole scenario is deeply concerning. And this line said it all: -Ignorance is less awkward than knowledge- An omen. Thank you for writing this, D. J.
Love this poem! Great free verse. The universe will align now! Great work!
Hot damn! Outstanding work. I believe this is my favourite from you. What a statement you made, and there's so many incredible lines that I'd have to copy the whole thing to highlight. 👏👏👏