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Deep in a humiliating well

They said: What's wrong? You're crying
And your tears fill your eyes
As if you've become a prisoner
Or drowned in the depths of a humiliating well
Try to swim, come on, don't be sad
I said: And the tears of my groaning heart
Tell me: The echo of my voice is a strong rope
So be my best support, my friend
For you are the one who keeps away from me the hours of longing
And makes me forget the pain and the groaning?
I withered like a jasmine flower
And the basil withered with me
When your voice surprised me years ago?
My being was shocked and the pulse of the veins
And the heartbeats died all at once
My soul was hungry and sadness was sad
And the wing of my poor bird was broken
So the heart was filled with buried pain
And after that I became like a sad person
In my feelings the walking heart
Guide me to a path where I find a loyal friend
Don't leave me lost on the shores of the sad sea
And I have become like a bird now
Because you are not a legendary bird
And your beautiful hair will not humiliate me
So let me go so that I may
find what guides me to certainty?
About the Creator
Kisama Riyo
I have always been interested in poetry and essay, especially rhyme style, so I decided to post my essay here and see if I have any talent in poetry or not.
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Appreciate your talent. I am happy to subscribed you 🥰. If you wish you can have a look on my poems as well.