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Lines blurred,
Smeared and smudged,
A pyre burned
I live a squandered life,
Beautiful collision between pain and pride
Blemished, yet I follow…
But to what end?
About the Creator
Sibley Shamra
Poetry is simply diction strung together as I see fit.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (2)
Striking and hauntingly reflective! That closing question? Perfectly placed. It doesn’t just end the poem—it echoes after it’s over. 💖
I feel the turmoil in this one. Great job.