Queen Jane
Secrets, lies and money. What could go wrong?

It’s just you and me, Queen Jane
Trapped like flies in a rosewood morning.
Lemon light slides down the wall;
Almost made it to that corner now
But it’s the shadow of moving leaves
Makes you think there’s still a pulse.
He’s still dead, just like last time you looked.
So what you going to do now?
Pick yourself up and aim for some long blank road
That links up here with there?
Call 911, tell them about an accident
In a voice too strange to trace?
Well it won’t work. There’s needles on the floor
Sparking as the morning spreads
Fractured crystals with bloody tips
Snagged in the Persian rug. And did you know
Your perfume dances with the smell of ashes?
That snifter on the mantel
Holds all your midnight prints.
You and he filled up the evening
Like those movies he brought home
Late on bleak wintry nights.
He'd been alone too long you know,
Still hungry after all those years
For soft hands in satin sheets
And lazy dances round this room
To music old before your time.
Then here you come like a moonlit dream,
Red lips and too much skin and frosted lace.
You slipped right into his heart
Filled up his empty spaces with your smile.
I saw it coming but I never let him know.
He owned me as well as you
And faith has always got its price. So
Don’t waste those tears on me. Your wings
Are dusted white and stained a little
But your arms make me think of cream and apricots
And your hair will feel like honey on my skin.
Let’s talk.
You know what you came for
And I know where he kept it all.
Behind the scenes:
My first published work was in poetry, and I've always been interested in songs that tell stories, as well as the punchy brevity of flash fiction. "Queen Jane" combines all these things, along with some inspiration from a news story I read years ago in Los Angeles, about a wealthy music producer found mysteriously dead in his Brentwood home.
About the Creator
Jean McKinney
Writer/artist reporting back from the places where the mundane meets the magical, with new stories and poems every week. Creator of the fantasy worlds of the Moon Road and Sorrows Hill. Learn more and get a free story at my LinkTree.
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Comments (8)
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Holy smokes... Great TS. 'Lemon light slides down the wall..." your imagery was on point.
Nicely Done. Congratulations on Top Story.
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This is brilliant, though I can't work out who the narrator is. It hardly matters.
Incredible work.
Wow, this is strikingly good. Congrats!
OOOH, this is great! So many phrases hinting at drugs: Your wings Are dusted white and stained a little. But: Your perfume dances with the smell of ashes? Creepy and descriptive with the lines that follow it.