Carton rouge means red card (in French).
It means you are removed from the game.
It means you crossed a line that was already clear.
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I am writing about the lines we keep crossing.
We see corruption and call it strategy.
We see violence and call it defense.
We see dishonesty and call it survival.
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We know the rules.
We agreed to them.
We teach them to children.
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Do not steal.
Do not harm.
Do not lie.
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Yet we excuse ourselves when it is convenient.
We protect people who break rules if they are powerful.
We punish people who break rules if they are weak.
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Carton rouge.
This is not symbolic.
It is a direct statement:
some actions deserve removal.
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If you abuse authority, you should lose it.
If you exploit others, you should face consequences.
If you endanger lives, you should not remain in control.
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Instead, we debate.
We delay.
We normalize.
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We say, “It’s complicated.”
We say, “Everyone makes mistakes.”
We say, “That’s just how the system works.”
The system works because we allow it to.
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A red card is clear.
It does not negotiate.
It does not soften the message.
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You broke the rule.
You leave the field.
This poem is about accountability.
It is about saying enough.
It is about refusing to pretend that repeated harm is accidental.
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Carton rouge.
Not tomorrow.
Not after another scandal.
Not after more damage.
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Now.
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Lori A. A.
Psychological analysis | Identity & human behavior | Reflection over sensationalism
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Wow! Great work and a great example of how 'saying it plainly' is done.
This shows hypocrisy at it's finest. Loved your poem!