Prior Engagement?
An Anniversary Acrostic
A day intended for celebration
Now may be a day doomed for infamy
Nightmare to replace my dearest daydream
Invitations already sealed and sent
Veil and white lace dress already purchased
Empty tear ducts of potential heartbreak
Releasing grip to extend open hands
Suspended and awaiting sovereignty
Am I flying, floating, or free falling?
Resolve is my vulnerability
You choose if we belong to yesterday
Author’s Note: This was written for Real Poetic’s Anniversary challenge.
About the Creator
D.K. Shepard
Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now
Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.
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Introduction This is inspired by my situation on Vocal, the Bouke de Vries work and the Screaming Trees song. I know that for many others, they would have walked away from Vocal, but I am taking it as a challenge. I get the feeling that Vocal moderators and others don't want me here (just my imposter syndrome paranoia), but I know a lot of people do, and obviously, some on Vocal do value me, so I will not be giving up.
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Comments (15)
Very clever acrostic… especially liked: “ Am I flying, floating, or free falling?”😃
Ooooo!! DK I love the darkness of this one, it's relatable and paints such an enticing picture for me!! Great work here!!
"Empty tear ducts of potential heartbreak" was my favourite line until I got to "flying, floating or free falling"
Well done on your superb writing.
This was so poignant and emotional! Loved your Acrostic!
Oh man, this was so full of sentiment and that last line really got me. I felt the anxiety and the fear of the unknown leading up to that one important moment - leaving the decision in someone else's hands. 🥹 Amazing work!
Your acrostic is beautiful, but so sad. Good luck in the challenge!
That last line really made me stop and think. Very profound.
What a great entry to the challenge! That last line will stick with me. Great job!
Your poem beautifully captures the complexity of human relationships and the poignant emotions that accompany them. The way you explore themes of commitment, longing, and the passage of time is both tender and thought-provoking.
WOW. Poignant, effective, all around masterful work on such a heartfelt and tragic subject. Beautiful, D.K.!
You are literally on fire...you must come with a warning lol. I am being funny to take, slightly, the pain from reading this rather sad feel from this beautiful acrostic.
An ominous acrostic that Real Poetic is sure to enjoy!
‘Empty tear ducts of potential heartbreak’ Limbo is such a sad place to be when it pertains to our future.
Well done! Great acrostic, though sad.