Pity seems benign, but it is poison
Smiling condescension strangles the soul
Better invisible than looked down on
Better a diamond mistaken for coal
Be mindful of the paradise within
However hellish the visible life
Do not read as the wages of some sin
Betrayal by the body, which yields strife
Those who cannot move slack, traitorous limbs
Can stalk with leopard grace through jungle dreams;
Voices unable to join in loud hymns
Secretly sing of being beyond seems
Treated as objects, subjects soon shrivel
Spare the prince within the pauper’s drivel
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D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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An impactful and emotional read.
So haunting and the picture inserts were the cherry on top of your poem.
That was so emotional! Loved your poem!
Deftly done, D.J. This line: "Can stalk with leopard grace through jungle dreams;" The mind is not limited and can lead you to soar!
A powerful critique of pity and condescension. Incredible! 💌
This is spectacular. The opening and closing lines go so hard. What a powerful piece!! Well done!