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Precipitation

Perception

By Colleen WaltersPublished 9 months ago 1 min read

A steady drum on

the roof of my heart

springs a leak

water falls frenzy

breaching trusted

trusses tremble

walls wail

slippery slopes

slide sideways

thunder flashes

blinding

lightning crashes

deafening

words trickle

like a rain chain

pulling raging rivulets

from the roof

of my heart

onto tierra verde

I catch a glimpse

of what cannot

seen

intrinsic

in the raindrops

drip drip dripping

off my hair

onto

parched feelings

it feels good

to be out

in the rain.

nature poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Colleen Walters

Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. ❤️

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  • Gregory Payton8 months ago

    How beautiful - Raindrops drip drip dripping off my hair. Well Done!!!

  • L.I.E9 months ago

    Beautiful and peaceful.

  • Love the video and the poem as well. 😊❤️

  • Nikita Angel9 months ago

    Beautiful ❤️

  • This was sooo beautiful. Loved both your poem and the video!

  • Luna9 months ago

    The rain is the fireworks of the gods. The pattering sound of the raindrops is the cracking sound of the fireworks. Fireworks are set off once at each station

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