The golden dewdrop
mirrors sunlight. Soon to be
evaporated.
About the Creator
PK Colleran
"There are people who write, but I think they’re quite different from people who must write."
Harper Lee
Writer, translator, seeker
Editor of Landscape of the Soul by Hipólito Sánchez and Words Matter by Jorge Waxemberg
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Comments (74)
Beautiful!
Beautiful! Your chosen photo is perfect. Congrats on your win!! 💜
You really captured time in the tiniest place possible! Congrats on your win! I'm glad I stumbled upon this haiku (even if it took me so long).
You took me on a journey and it was only for a moment. Congrats on your win!
Ooph. I always say I'm a bit unmoved by haiku...except when they hit.
HAIKU is a greatest form of poetic expression that uses few words to capture a moment or idea.
Wow! Congratulations on well deserved Top story and First place!🎉🎉🎉
Incredible. I see both optimism in smallness and hopelessness in what always happens.
It makes me think about how powerful a life is and can be even though a lifetime is just a small blip in eternity. It's beautiful.
Nice piece ✨💖😉Congratulations🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉✨🎉🎉
Brilliant!!!
Your haiku titled "Precious Moment" by PK Colleran is a beautiful and poignant description of a fleeting moment in nature. The imagery of the golden dewdrop reflecting sunlight before it evaporates is both vivid and evocative, and the use of such simple language and structure in the haiku format is impressive. Congratulations on winning first place in the Time Capsule Haiku Challenge with this stunning piece of writing.Thank you for sharing your work with me and giving me the opportunity to read and appreciate your artistry. It's always a pleasure to encounter talented writers and be inspired by their creations. If you have any other writing you'd like to share, I'd be delighted to read it.
Simply brilliant. 👏🫶🏻
Congratulations 👏
Congrats! I’m so happy for you. This was a well deserved win!
congragulation
Congratulations! Your haiku captured a amazing moment in time. You observation and skill in relating it to words is amazing. Kudo’s.
I love the imagery
Congrats on 1 st , well deserve, Bravo
Best comp winner I've seen. Literally everything I love about the format.
This is an exceptional haiku. Congratulations on your win.
Congratulations! This is gorgeous!
Congratulations on your win! : )
Congrats Dear Patricia.
Congratulations on the win, Patricia!! Well done!! 😍😍