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Postcards...promises unfulfilled

Poem for Poppy's February Prompt Thingo

By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Created with the help of ChatGPT/Dall-E

postcards of promises

unfulfilled and plans

unfollowed

backburner of visits

delayed and trips

postponed

lifetime of catch-ups

uncaught and expectations

unmet

sirens of life

unlived and dreams

unrealised

grave of regrets

final place of rest

and unrest

*

Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: Poppy's words obviously tapped into a lot of sadness, given my entries into her prompt thingo. This one is that old nutshell of unfulfilled promoses and unrealised dreams.

Also...the irony is not lost that I held this back last night because I didn't want to shove everything out and then missed the deadline, bahaha.

You can find more about her wonderful prompt thingo here:

Here are some more by me:

fact or fictionheartbreakperformance poetrysad poetrysocial commentaryinspirational

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Poppy 2 years ago

    Such a relatable feeling put into words perfectly. I adore the ending. Also, love your ai artwork! And the irony is quite amusing :)

  • A delightful 'Un' poem... excellent as always! Impressive picture too.

  • So sorry you missed the deadline Sir Paul 🥺 Also, of you tweak the last line a little, you can enter this into the Inverse challenge! 🍩🥐

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Graves of regret. I can see there would be no rest there. Well done.

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Well done again, sir! A bit morose, perhaps, but rightfully so.

  • D.K. Shepard2 years ago

    “Backburner of visits delayed” was such a clever and apt descriptor! Great work!

  • Yep, that about sums it up.

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    Well done friend.

  • John Cox2 years ago

    It's too bad that regret is never quite as beautiful as this poem! Loved the cluttered image at the poem's beginning, too.

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    "final place of rest/and unrest" - that bit really got me!

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    so thought-provoking. It's fabulous.

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