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Portrait #1

Portrait Series

By Brittany Marie OrtegaPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
Portrait #1
Photo by JJ Ying on Unsplash

Woman -

approximately 60 years of age,

her face reminds me of peanut butter

dolloped like candle wax with thumb

prints where a brass seal should

be.

She is top heavy in her newfound beliefs.

Her voice is thick like crude oil n'sometimes just as dark.

There is a popsicle stick quality to her posture.

She laughs the way thumbs hail for cabs.

Man -

approximately 25 years of age,

has a face like the tear in the eye of a sad penguin.

He is soft in the way a new mattress is soft

which is to say quite firm, but one

rarely mentions that prior to

purchase.

His voice is also thick, but thick like

the sugar milk

at the bottom of a bowl of

corn flakes.

I like his eyes when he smiles.

They feel like hot water and 5am showers.

His laughter is a drone nobody

else knows how

to use.

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