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Prompt 6/9/2025 "Carpenter"

By Ellie HoovsPublished 7 months ago 1 min read

I was born with a soul

splintered between the above

and below

as if the blueprint lacked cohesion,

never marrying the whole.

Crooked be the frame,

only good for load-bearing shame,

nails driven rusted, sideways,

only the hammerer to blame.

I let the world lathe my edges,

until I was sanded smooth "enough"

those who wanted to reach out and touch

only left me hollow;

a cabinet no one dares to open,

shelves empty, never stocked with love.

They say measure twice

cut once

so why don't I fit

ramshackle,

rustic,

raw,

... can anyone really

love

the sawdust?

I am it.

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Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

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  • K.B. Silver 7 months ago

    I love the metaphor you created with this, it is so thought-provoking. As someone who salvages and upcycles things, I say yes. very lovable. 💗

  • C. Rommial Butler7 months ago

    Well-wrought!

  • This was a great take on the prompt

  • Rachel Deeming7 months ago

    Excellently evoked, Ellie. Again, with the line at the end which packs the punch.

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