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By Aspen Marie Published 2 months ago 1 min read
Photo: mine

Walk on your toes

Silent steps

Weight carried

In muscled calves

Have you ever

Witnessed a woman

Stomping in heels

Ridiculous, impetuous

Precarious stiletto perch

We are not birds

Yet we volunteer

To be storks

Last night I wore

A raven’s guise

Weak attempt at

Sylphlike statue

Kohl lined eyes

While sleek tresses

Bounced silver light

Final touch: fake nails

Act of adding spikes

To extremities

Some kind of

Social battle armour

Upon night’s end

Numb feet floundered

(I had also

Stabbed my nostrils

Blowing my nose)

From the sanctity

Of my car

Stepping out of

Self-inflicted torture

Popping off

Pointy talons

Melting back into

This soft creature

That I am

An easy, fluid flow

Shaped by others

I wrap around

Those I love

No hard edges

Inside or out

Displaced by burdens

But also a

Burbling brook of

Laughter and joy

It can be nice

On occasion

To become a

Mysterious creature

Chimera hybrid

Exotic eyes

All claws and teeth

Yet I would

Rather be a river

Warmed by sunlight

Offering peace, comfort

Defined by the

Sturdy banks

Of those beloved

Holding me close

Free Verse

About the Creator

Aspen Marie

In love with life and all of its foibles.

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  • C. Rommial Butler2 months ago

    Well-wrought! Protective eyewear may be in order for flying heels and nails!

  • Hahahahahahaha I'm so sorry, I know it must have been so painful, but I can't help laughing. How is your nose now? Also, red and black are my favourite colours, and I absolutely loved those nails!

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Oh love this. And as much as I love my wife glammed up looking sexy I understand the frustration of the facade. Another important and Evocative poem, dear Marie! Well wrought

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