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Seeking inspiration in the we,
we wrote our love as poetry.
Never fully knowing the
authentic you and me,
our magical prose
often flowed, but
never on
the same
page.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (17)
I really loved the flow of this one Cathy!! Great work!!
Excellent!! One of your best!
Wow now this is a winner! Great work Cathy!
Absolutely beautiful! Wonderful job and concept, my friend :)
Cathy, Nice work and dramatic parallel! βΊοΈππ
Wonderful!! As others have said the last line is superb but thereβs some really great ones before it too ! Really loved the we vs you and I and poetry vs prose juxtapositions
So well done, Cathy, and such a brilliant analogy! LOVE this one, friend!
Brilliant.
"never on the same page", that's a powerful line right there
This reminded me of parallel lines who travel together not never meet. Loved your poem!
Brilliant metaphor for a tragic situation. Bravo, Cathy!!
So poignantly put.
This is fantastic π bravo
This is fabulous, Cathy! Beautifully done. I love your Nonet!
Oooo, the flow on this one was so easy and natural but the end landed hard. Really creative and thoughtful entry, my friend :)
A nice breakup nonet.
Great words for the challenge