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Poem: "Finalmente"

"On an Amtrak for three or so days..."

By Kirk Pineda, LMHC (aka "DEUXQANE")Published 5 years ago 1 min read
Poem: "Finalmente"
Photo by Hansel Wong on Unsplash

I'm on an Amtrak for three or so days

the sleeper carts are impressive

a slow hum and rattle of metal

is the steady ambiance

for the next eighty hours

I'm riding out my whims

but also following my gut

some days ago were a doozy

and a tether was finally cut

symbolic is this trek

an exoneration of myself

from things that went right to left

what say you, my muse

as we travel back in time?

hindsight clear

insight primed

foresight steady

chair reclined

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inspired by the aftermath of letting go of someone.

more works on my instagram: @ephrain_

inspirational

About the Creator

Kirk Pineda, LMHC (aka "DEUXQANE")

93% of communication is non-verbal. Here's the other 7%.

I'm a therapist based in New York. I love my kettlebell, jump rope, and rower. Mystery/fantasy, rollerblading, herbalism, poetry, RPDR, and water enjoyer.

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