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Please, Make Them Stop!

A Haunted Echos haiku

By Dana CrandellPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Please, Make Them Stop!
Photo by Reza Hasannia on Unsplash

Somewhere in the dark

Screams shatter the fragile night

And they draw closer

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One more for the Haunted Echos Challenge:

Thanks for reading!

HaikuMental Healthsurreal poetry

About the Creator

Dana Crandell

Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.

Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd.

My first published poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity

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  • Harbor Benassa3 months ago

    I love how you used the last line to turn the first two lines into a story with momentum. Great work!

  • Cathy holmes4 months ago

    Great work, my friend. The screams drawing closer amped the spooky level 10-fold.

  • Grz Colm4 months ago

    Eek! 😊👍 Looking forward to these. Great job, Dana.

  • This was soooo creeepppyyyy! Loved your Haiku!

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    Oh, nicely done.

  • Yikes! I don't want to know what's drawing closer, but I do want to say that this is a great haunted haiku!

  • Stephanie Hoogstad4 months ago

    “And they draw closer”—what a disturbing line! Well done on the haiku, and good luck on the challenge!

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