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Somewhere in the dark
Screams shatter the fragile night
And they draw closer
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One more for the Haunted Echos Challenge:
Thanks for reading!
About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd.
My first published poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity


Comments (7)
I love how you used the last line to turn the first two lines into a story with momentum. Great work!
Great work, my friend. The screams drawing closer amped the spooky level 10-fold.
Eek! 😊👍 Looking forward to these. Great job, Dana.
This was soooo creeepppyyyy! Loved your Haiku!
Oh, nicely done.
Yikes! I don't want to know what's drawing closer, but I do want to say that this is a great haunted haiku!
“And they draw closer”—what a disturbing line! Well done on the haiku, and good luck on the challenge!