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I want to curl up in your arms
with my head resting on your chest
listening to your heartbeat
lub-dub! lub-dub!
I want to nestle inside you and
fall asleep there forever
while the rain is drumming on the roof
pit-pat! pit-pat!
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Comments (7)
Aw, so sweet <3
nice-we had rainy days and my landlord's puppies were like this
How lovely! And wonderful onomatopoeia work!
So serene and adorable an image you have painted for us. ❤️ This poem can apply to both humans and cats, haha. I have to ask: are you cat person, Imola?
Awww, this was so sweet and lovely. Such a wonderful feeling!
A very cute poem, I like kittens but puppies would be better. Good job on the cozy.
Aww this sounds like heaven. Cute poem 💖